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08/10/2005
Sin embryo
she woke up late
her face pale
with stomach ache
the sun shines
droplets of wine
still on the ground
her face wet
with tears droplets
she is hopeless, sleepless
a red rose
dried and lone
its dews so sore
she sat hopeless
defeated by sadness
she looked through the window
no colourful and jumping rainbow
her tears continued to flow
she was alone
before, she never was
in this room lost
in this room she loved
in this room, she cried not
he was always loving and soft
the walls no longer hear
his voice, so dear
her whispears of fear
the walls no longer see
this woman in ecstacy
putting her head on his knee
the mirror no longer refletcs
their bodies rests
after the love's wrestle
and their loud breaths
he sowed in her a life
not yet exposed to light
it is still breathing inside
a grain of love growing
over her womb spreading
her belly's swelling
slapped by reality
she realized lately
her lover's treachery
she put her head on the pillow
looking at the window
feeling a bitter sorrow
fading with the rose
waiting the foetus to grow
and shame to show
living with her parents' disgust
ignoring the past
breatjing fast
to give birth
to her death
the child cries for life
misery inside
for, the child is a sign
of the sin they shared
love they made
love, so fake
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I really don’t get your point in that poem :-s is it mere fiction ?! it is so confusing! or maybe this is the very point of it: you deliberately want it to be confusing to portray the chaos inside your soul...
I can’t figure out whether there are one or more than one character as heroes of this poem.. I feel you are merging 2 (female) protagonists (I’m not talking abt other characters)...
you tell abt the 2 of them as if they were one person... I’m really puzzled.
Anyhow, when I read poetry I don’t care much abt the theme than the musicality and the feelings that come out of it. It’s so moving … (especially that I feel like crying now: it is the appropriate tone for my present mood)
Ecrit par : Mery'M | 10/10/2005
well Red, i just sneaked under the skin of a woman qui s'est rejouit de l'amour à deux et s'est retrouvé face au scandale en solo...c'est ce qui arrive d'ailleurs tout les jours à nos jeunes femmes...je pense au chagrin, aux mères célibataires...i try to feel what i may encounter in advance...this may happen to anybody!!
Ecrit par : ana | 11/10/2005
ok, I understand now... so, it's fiction inspired from reality: distress about what might happen given the circumstances we know...
what confused me is that i was expecting to read a poem on the theme u told me... so i was mislead.
whatever, always a pleasure reading ya.
biz.
Ecrit par : Mery'M | 12/10/2005
oh i understand now !! you know im thinking about it day and night...actually, im short of words...i have an idea about it,yet words dont come easily!! but it was so releasing to talk about it with you! thanks Red for being there ;)
Ecrit par : anaconda | 12/10/2005
Glad i can help just a little. and u know u r not the only one that enjoys and feels better owing to our discussions :-)
Ecrit par : Mery'M | 12/10/2005
bessa7a the new look of the blog ;) c plus jovial :)
Ecrit par : El Mehdi | 15/10/2005
Hi Ana!
I can see that u too have been victim of the blogspirit bloody bug.. I'm really angry!!!! I lost almost all pictures and most settings. gotta start everything from the beginning and i don't fell like doing it right now: i'm too lazy and i'm not in the mood..
shit!!shit!! and double shit!!!!
bon à part ça, tt va bien? (un peu de politesse au passage ne fait de mal à personne) ;-)
Ecrit par : Mery'M | 17/10/2005
hello !
wayah!! je crois que je vais demenager à skyblog parce que je risque de ne rien comprendre f had speed dial blogspirit.
tu me trouveras dans http://kukisssa.skyblog.com
triple s !
see ya !!
hey by the way, sent you an email !
Ecrit par : ana | 17/10/2005
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